托福写作高分范文-Experience and knowledge
对于托福备考来说，想要提升自己的成绩充分的备考时间和方法是比不可少的。而对于中国考生而言，在托福写作中，所缺少的并是词汇量和句型掌握，而更多的是逻辑思维的运用和展开。那么，相信在以下一些满分范例的阅读中就会为大家带来不少的备考灵感。
写作标题：
Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and
knowledge, or to ask others for advice?
写作范文：
As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is
often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment,
eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many
years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest
universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom
through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great
minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways
work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be
regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often
turn out to be the prime alternative.
Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute
greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all
experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal
effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A
single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining
compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees
further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains
why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork
in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange
of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each
individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the
entire global village.
Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own
promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary
to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in
different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of
speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange
sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding
about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each
other.
Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to
absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and
ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances
more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups
and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best
solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little
we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.
