湖南沙市雅礼实验中学2020-2021学年八年级下学期期中联考英语试题（答案+解析）

中联考英语试题（答案+解析）

【全国百强校】湖南沙市雅礼实验中学2020-2021学年八年级下学期期中联考英语试题

学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________

一、单选题

1．Aron Ralston used his knife to cut ______ half his right arm. A．up B．off C．out

2．Mario used to ______ to work, but now he is used to ______because he thinks it’s better for him to keep healthy.

A．driving; walk B．drive; walk C．drive; walking 3．The sick kids in hospital are very sad. Let’s ______.

A．cheer them up B．give them up C．put them up 4．V olunteering is very important. We should do what we can ______ those homeless people. A．help B．to help C．helping

5．Sandy could save more money ______she can buy a gift for her mother’s birthday. A．until B．although C．so that

6．---Can I _____ your flashlight?

---Sure, but you mustn’t ______ it to othe rs.

A．lend; borrow B．borrow; lend C．provide; borrow 7．Last summer I found ____ easy to speak English when I visited my aunt in England. A．that B．this C．it

8．To _____ surprise, when the rainstorm came, Cathy was making _____ way to school. A．me; her B．my; hers C．my; her

9．I _____ a shower when Cathy _____ me at eight yesterday evening.

A．was taking; called B．took; was calling C．took; called 二、完型填空

My friend’s son, Tom, was unhappy and 10 last year. He couldn’t get on well with his friends. He thought they usually hurt him. He didn’t change himself 11 his grandpa told him a story.

The story was about two friends, Mario and Jimmy, who were walking in the desert(沙漠). During the walk, they had a 12 and Mario hit Jimmy in the face. Jimmy was hurt, but he didn’t say anything. 13 he wrote in the sand, “Today my best friend hit me in the face.” They 14 walking. When they saw green fields and a beautiful river, they decided to 15 . Jimmy fell into the river and started shouting for help, but Mario saved him.

After Jimmy was out of 16 , he wrote on a stone, “Today my best friend saved my life.” Mario was in 17 and asked Jimmy, “After I hurt you, you wrote in th e sand and now you write on a stone. Why?” Jimmy replied, “When someone hurts us, we should write it down in the sand where 18 can blow it away. But when someone does good things for us, we must carve(雕刻) them in the stone where no winds can blow it away.”

After 19 this, Tom was shocked and kept silent. From then on, he changed a lot and became happy.

10．A．nervous B．excited C．clever 11．A．when B．until C．after

12．A．talk B．fight C．dinner 13．A．Instead B．So C．Though 14．A．stopped B．started C．continued 15．A．take a shower B．take a break C．have a meeting 16．A．danger B．lake C．sea 17．A．excitement B．trouble C．surprise 18．A．winds B．clouds C．snow 19．A．watching B．hearing C．reading

三、阅读单选 Volunteers Wanted

Help at the old people’s home.

Work with old people, read newspapers to them and talk to them.

May 1st --- May 7th Apply

online

at

http://www.doczj.com/doc/39d2d7f0854769eae009581b6bd97f192279bfaf.html or call Mona at 0731-*******.

20．What should volunteers do at the old people’s home? A．Read books to old people B．Talk to old people C．Learn new skills 21．How long will the volunteer activity last?

A．Two weeks B．Four days C．About a week

22．What kind of movie is Ready Player One?

A．Science fiction, 2D B．Action movie, 3D/IMAX C．Science fiction,

3D/IMAX

23．Which movie is release earliest in China?

A．Ready Player One B．Hindi Medium C．Operation Red Sea 24．Where is the longest movie from?

A．America B．India C．China

In American, a group called Thread has been helping young people make their dreams come true. The group is in Baltimore, Maryland. Its volunteers help high school students with almost everything.

Thread started eleven years ago. It was the idea of Sara, a girl from a poor neighborhood. She was a student at the Johns Hopkins University School of Medicine. Sara wanted to do something to help young people from poor neighborhoods. She wanted to give poor students some advice and help.

Thread helps students in trouble in high school to find people who can help them. The relationship between the students and helpers may last from five to ten years. These students may be too poor to go to school. Thread says it will stay with the students whatever happens. It never gives up on them.

The volunteers help the young people in many different ways. This might include giving the students a ride home from school or helping them with their lessons. The group also helps

students to learn skills for work. They even spend time with the young people on weekends. 25．Who do the volunteer from Thread help?

A．High school students B．Middle school students C．College students 26．Which of the following is TRUE?

A．Thread started 10 years ago. B．The idea of Thread was from Sara. C．Sara comes from a rich neighborhood.

27．How long may the relationship between the students and helpers last?

A．4 years B．8 years C．12 years

28．Which one is not mentioned in paragraph 4?

A．The volunteers help the young people with their lessons. B．The volunteers help the young people learn skills for work.

C．The volunteers give money to the poor students. 29．Which of the following would be the best title for the passage?

A．A Girl Named Sara B．A Group Called Thread C．How to Help Poor Students

四、补全短文5选4

Why do you want to learn English? Before you begin

studying English, ask yourself one question. Why do I want to study English? Is it because you want to, or because someone else wants you to?30．, like every decision in life.

If you know why you want to study, it is easy to set a goal for yourself. Maybe you want to travel to an English-speaking country. Your goal might be learn \"Survival(生存) English\". Perhaps you want to do business with foreigners, then your goal might be to learn \"Business(商务) English\".31．.

32．, if you want to learn it well. You should listen to tapes every day. You should often speak English with your teachers and friends. You should read English every morning. And you'd better keep a diary every day. In this way, you can study English well.

33．. The things we do best in life are the things we enjoy doing. If you don't have fun learning English, you're not studying the right way! You can be a serious student who has fun at the same time.

A．You should keep on practicing English every day B．Have fun learning English

C．Whatever your goals are, write them down D．Studying English is very important

E.Studying English must be something you wants to do 五、回答问题

A popular cultural program National Treasure(国家宝藏) was shown on CCTV-3 on Sunday night.

In the first show, the palace Museum in Beijing showed three treasure: a tone drum, a painting and a large vase(花瓶). Three famous actors Wang Kai, Li Chen and Tony Leung played roles of national treasure keepers with other actors, sharing their stories with these treasures. Li Chen, who acted as Emperor Huizong of the Song Dynasty(960-1279), told the history about W ang

Ximeng’s great painting.

During the TV show, the nine main museums in China – the Palace Museum, Shanghai Museum, Nanjing Museum, Hunan Provincial Museum, Henan Museum, Shanxi History Museum, Hubei Provincial Museum, Zhejiang Provincial Museum and Liaoning Provincial Museum – will each show three national treasures.

As a cultural show, the National Treasures tells the stories of national treasures. The program includes different kinds of art forms, like documentary(纪录片) and drama(戏剧). In the show, national treasure keepers will introduce each treasure and tell us the stories with the treasures and their historical mystery(奥秘).

34．Is National Treasure a cultural program?

_________________________________________________________ 35．When was National Treasure shown on CCTV-3? __________________________________________________________ 36．What did the Palace Museum show in the first show? __________________________________________________________ 37．How many museums will show national treasures? __________________________________________________________ 38．Who will introduce each treasure in the show? __________________________________________________________ 六、语篇翻译

阅读下面的短文，然后将画线部分的句子译成汉语或英语。 Do you keep fish and turtles in your classroom at school? 65. 你的老师允许你在课上喂养动物吗？Do you put the food you leave over into a compost(混合肥料) box? That’s all part of a school day at Barnard School?

Barnard School is a “green” school in America. 66. T his school wants to tell kids the

importance of caring about the environment. The students can also learn a different way to live a healthier life.

With the special lessons, about 400 students in the school study the environment all day long. 67. 虽然课程有点难，但是学生们对此很感兴趣。Students throw some lunch leftovers(吃剩的饭菜) into a compost box in a greenhouse. 68. They get used to using the waste to grow plants.

At Barnard School, almost everything has something to do with the environment. Students sing songs about the environment. Their art work also has something to do with the environment. Even their math classes are about caring about the environment. All the students have these classes happily. 69. I think these classes make a big difference to students’ life. 39．_________________________________________________________

40．__________________________________________________________ 41．_________________________________________________________ 42．__________________________________________________________ 43．__________________________________________________________ 七、填写适当的句子补全对话

A: Hello, David. There was a big storm last evening. 44．? B: Oh, I was seeing the doctor in the hospital when it came. A: 45．?

B: I hurt my back in PE class. A: I’m sorry to hear that.46．?

B: You are right, I really want to stay at home and rest, but I think the schoolwork is very important. You see, my English is very poor. 47．?

A: Yes, sure. I will try my best to help you improve your English.

B: 48．.

A: No problem. I hope you’ll be bette r soon. 八、书信作文

49．假如你是李华，是一名初二的学生。最近你感觉压力很大，不开心。因为近段时间你和父母相处得不太好。一方面，你的父母工作忙，无暇照顾你；另一方面，你的父母过多的关注你的成绩，给你报了许多课外辅导班，导致你没有许多自由时间。请你给你的父母写一封信，谈谈目前的问题以及你的感受，并给父母提出三条建议，来改善你们之间的关系。

要求：

（1）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）文中不能出现真实的校名或人名； （3）包含所有的要点，可以适当发挥。 Dear parents,

I’m really unhappy these days.

___________________________________________________________________________

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___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________

Best wishes! Yours,

Li Hua 参 1．B 【解析】 【详解】

句意：Aron Ralston使用刀子切除了他的右半臂。选项所给词都可以和cut构成固定短语，其中cut up意为“切碎”；cut off意为“切除”；cut out意为“删除、删减”。结合语境可知答案应选B项。

2．C 【详解】

Mario过去常常开车上班，但是现在习惯于步行，因为他认为那对于他保持健康来说是更好的方式。题干中的drive和walk均为动词，前者意为“开车、驾驶”，后者意为“步行”。分析题干可知第一空考查固定短语used to do“过去常常做某事”，第二空考查be used to doing“习惯于做某事”，结合语境，故应选C项。

【点睛】

本题需注意掌握几个易错短语（1）use sth. to do“使用某物做某事”（2）used to do“过去常常做某事”；（3）be used to do“被用来做”；（4）be used to doing“习惯做某事”。3．A

【解析】 【详解】

句意：生病住院的孩子们非常忧伤。让我们使他们振奋起来。选项中cheer up意为“使…振奋、高兴”、give up意为“放弃”、put up意为“张贴、搭建”。结合前文语境可知答案应选A项。

4．B 【详解】

句意：志愿工作很重要。我们应该做我们可以做的事情来帮助那些无家可归的人们。选项中help为实义动词“帮助”。分析题干可知We should do what we can为包含宾语从句的主从复合句， can后省略了do，结合语义可以“我们做可以做的事情”目的是帮助无家可

归的人，故本题应选择to do不定式结构作目的状语，故答案应选B项。

5．C 【详解】

句意：Sandy可以攒更多的钱，以便于能给她妈妈买个生日礼物。A项意为“直到…”常用来引导时间状语从句；B项意为“尽管”，常用于引导让步状语从句；C项意为“以便于、为了”，可用于引导目的状语从句。结合语境可知Sandy攒钱的目的是给妈妈买生日礼物，故

答案应选C项。 【点睛】

考查从属连词的时候，需要了解每个连词的用法，然后代入原文看一下结构和意思是否对应。Until用法小结：1. 用在肯定式的时候，表示谓语动作一直延续到until所指的时间，谓

语动词需是延续性动词；2. 用在否定式的时候，构成not…until结构，意为“直到……才（做）”，谓语动词必须是短暂性动词。

6．B 【解析】 【详解】

句意：--我可以借下你的手电筒吗？--当然，但是你不能把它借给别人。选项中borrow和lend 为实义动词“借”，但前者表示“借入”，常与介词from连用，构成固定短语borrow

from“向…借”；后者表示“借出”，常与介词to连用，构成固定短语lend to“把…借给

某人”；provide为实义动词“提供”，其常构成的两个短语是：provide sth for sb和provide sb. with sth. 结合本题可知问句指“借入”，答语指“借出”，故答案应选B项。

7．C 【解析】 【详解】

句意：去年当我拜访我英国的姑姑的时候我发现说英语很容易。选项A、B为指示代词“那个”和“这个”；it为代词“它”，常用于作形式主语和形式宾语。本题考查“find it+adj.+to do”的结构“发现做某事是….”，其中it为形式宾语，真正的宾语是其后的to do不定式，

结合本题语境可知答案应选C项。 8．C 【详解】

句意：让我感到惊讶的是，当暴风雨来临时，Cathy正在前往学校。选项中me为人称代词I“我”的宾格形式，my是形容词性物主代词形式；her是人称代词she的宾格形式或形容词性物主代词形式，hers是其名词性物主代词形式。第一空考查固定短语to one’s surprise“让某人惊讶的是…”，第二空考查固定短语make one’s way to…“前往某地”，结合语境可知答案应选C项。

【点睛】

to one’s+情感类名词，意为“使某人……(感情)的是”，表示情感的程度要在名词前加great，或者是在短语前加much；尤其需要注意的是无论人是单数还是复数，名词不加s。9．A

【详解】

句意：当Cathy昨天晚上8点给我打电话时，我正在洗澡。选项中took为take的过去式形式，take a shower为固定短语“洗澡”，其动作是延续性的；called是call的过去式形式，意为“打电话”，其动作是短暂性的。分析语境可知本题考查when引导的时间状语从句，从句中“打电话”的动作是短暂性的，故应使用一般过去时，主句中“洗澡”的动作是延续性的，应使用过去进行时，故答案应选择A项。

10．A 11．B 12．B 13．A

14．C 15．B 16．A 17．C 18．A 19．B 【分析】

本文讲述了我朋友的儿子Tom由于和朋友相处不好而不高兴，通过爸爸给他讲了一个关于朋友的故事而有所感悟的故事。两个好朋友在沙漠中发生争吵，结果一个打了另一个，被打的那位将这件事写在了沙子上；他们继续行走，在休息时，刚才被打的人掉进了河里，他的朋友救了他，他将这件事刻在了石头上。这篇文章告诉我们应该忘记仇恨，记住别人的恩惠。10．句意：我朋友的儿子Tom去年不开心而且焦虑。A焦虑的；B兴奋的；C聪明的。根据语境可知应选择消极意义的词汇，故选A项。

11．句意：知道他的爷爷给他讲了一个故事，他才改变了自己。A当…时；B直到…；C 在…之后。根据语境可知本题考查固定短语not…until“直到…才”，故选B项。

12．句意：在步行途中，他们打了一架。Mario打在了Jimmy的脸上。A谈话；B打架；C 晚餐。根据后文Mario hit Jimmy in the face.可知他们打了一架，故答案应选B项。

13．句意：Jimmy受伤了，但是他什么都没说。反而，他在沙滩上写道“今天我最好的朋友打在了我的脸上”A反而，代替；B所以；C即使。根据语境判断此处为转折关系，故选A 项。

14．句意：他们继续走。A停止；B开始；C继续。根据后文When they saw green fields and a beautiful river, they decided to …可知他们是继续走下去，故选C项。

15．句意：当他们看到一片绿洲和一条美丽的河时，他们决定休息。A洗澡；B休息；C开

会。根据语境可知Mario和Jimmy在沙漠中行走，看到绿洲时停

下来休息，故答案应选B 项。

16．句意：在Jimmy摆脱危险之后，他在石头上写道：“今天我最好的朋友救了我的命。”A 危险；B湖；C海洋。根据语境可知Mario把Jimmy从河里救了出来，故应是摆脱了危险，故选A项。

17．句意：Mario很惊讶并且文Jimmy：“在我伤害你之后，你写在沙子上，现在你又写在石头上，为什么？”A兴奋、激动；B麻烦；C惊讶。根据语境可知本题考查固定短语in surprise“惊讶地”，故答案应选C项。

18．句意：当有人伤害我们，我们应该把它写到风可以吹走的沙子上。A风；B云；C雪。根据后文blow it away“吹走”，可知答案应选A项。

19．句意：当听到这里，Tom震惊并沉默了。A看；B听；C读。根据语境可知前文Jimmy 的解释深深地触动了Tom，故Tom是听Jimmy的解释，故答案应选B项。

20．B 21．C 【解析】 【分析】

本文是老年之家志愿者招募的广告。

20．句意：志愿者应该在老年之家做什么？A给老年人读书；B跟老人说话；C学习新技能。根据Work with old people, read newspapers to them and talk to them.可知答案应选B项。21．句意：志愿者活动将会持续多长时间？A. 一周；B. 四天；C大约一周。根据May 1st --- May 7th 可知志愿者的活动是动5月1日到7日，故大约1周的时间，所以要选C项。

22．C 23．C 24．A 【解析】 【分析】

本文是三部电影《头号玩家》、《起跑线》、《红海行动》的介绍，内容包括产地、类型、上映时间、时长等。

22．细节理解题。句意：Ready Player One（《头号玩家》）是什么类型的电影？A. 2D科幻电影；B. 3D巨幕动作电影；C. 3D巨幕科幻电影。根据Ready Player One电影信息：Ready Player One 3D/IMAX及Type: Science fiction 可知答案应选C项。

23．细节理解题。句意：哪个电影在中国上映最早？A《头号玩家》；B《起跑线》；C《红海行动》。根据三个电影介绍中的Release date(上映时间) 信息可知三个电影在中国的上映时间分别是2018年3月29日、2018年4月4日和2018年2月16日，故《红海行动》上映时间最早，所以应选C项。

24．细节理解题。句意：时间最长的电影时哪个国家的？根据表格信息Running time“播放时长”可知时间最长的电影是Ready Player One《头号玩家》，是一部美国电影，故选A项。

25．A 26．B 27．B 28．C 29．B 【分析】

本文主要介绍了一个名为Thread的志愿者组织在各个方面帮助高中生。

25．细节理解题。句意：来自Thread的志愿者帮助谁？A高中生；B中学生；C大学生。根据Its volunteers help high school students with almost everything. 可知Thread的帮助对象是高中生，故应选A项。

26．细节理解题。句意：哪一项陈述是正确的？A. Thread组织10年前成立的；B. Thread的想法来自Sara；C. Sara来自一个富有的街区。根据Thread started eleven years ago.可知其成立于11年前，故A项错误；根据It was the idea of Sara, a girl from a poor

neighborhood.可知成立Thread是Sara的想法，但Sara并非来自富裕街区，故答案应选B项。

27．细节理解题。句意：学生与帮助者的关系会持续多久？A4年；B8年；C12年。根据The relationship between the students and helpers may last from five to ten years.可知他们的关系会持续5至10年，故B项正确。

28．句意：第4段中没有提到下列哪一项？A志愿者在功课方面帮助年轻人；B志愿者帮助年轻人学习工作技能；C志愿者给穷孩子们捐钱。根据第4段内容可知志愿者让学生们搭车、帮助他们学习功课、帮助他们获得工作技能，也在周末和他们待在一起，不包括给贫穷的学生捐钱，故选C项。

29．标题选择题。句意：下列哪一项可以是文章的标题？A一个叫做Sara的女孩；B一个叫做Thread的组织；C如何帮助穷苦的孩子。根据文章内容可知，本文主要介绍Thread的组织帮助年轻人实现他们的梦想，故答案应选B项。

30．E 31．C 32．A 33．B 【分析】

本文针对“如何学习英语”提出了一系列建议。作者建议读者要确定学习目标、每天坚持练习英语，并且要以快乐的方式学习。

30．句意：学英语必须是你想要做的事情，像生活中的每个决定一样。前句意为你为什么想要学英语？那是因为你想做，或者其他人想让你做。根据语境可知本段描述学英语的动机，故选E项符合语境。

31．句意：不管你的目标是什么，把它写下来。分析本段内容可知每个人有不同的目标，无论什么目标，都应该写下来，故选C项最符合语境。

32．句意：如果你想学好，你应该坚持每天练习英语。根据后文“你应该每天听磁带”、“你应该每天和老师或朋友们说英语”等可

知本句强调坚持练习英语，故答案应选A项。33．句意：快乐学习英语。根据后文语境If you don’t have fun learning English, you’re not studying the right way!可知我们需要快乐地学习英语，故选择B项最符合语境。

34．Yes, it is.

35．It was shown on Sunday night.

36．It showed three treasures, a tone drum, a painting and a large vase.

37．Nine museums.

38．The national treasure keepers. 【解析】 【分析】

本文介绍了在CCTV-3热映的综艺节目《国家宝藏》，节目中将会有9个中国主要博物馆展出文物，国宝守护人将向观众讲解宝物背后的故事与历史。

34．句意：《国家宝藏》是一个文化类节目吗？根据A popular cultural program National Treasure(国家宝藏) was shown on CCTV-3 on Sunday night. 可知它是文化类节目，故答案应为Yes, it is.

35．句意：《国家宝藏》节目什么时候再CCTV-3播出？根据A popular cultural program National Treasure(国家宝藏) was shown on CCTV-3 on Sunday night. 可知它在周日晚上播出，故答案应为It was shown on Sunday night.

36．句意：在第一场节目中故宫展出了什么？根据In the first show, the palace Museum in Beijing showed three treasures: a tone drum, a painting and a large vase(花瓶). 可知答案应为It

showed three treasures, a tone drum, a painting and a large vase.

37．句意：有多少个博物馆将要展出国家宝藏？根据第三段的内容可知During the TV show, the nine main museums in China –

the Palace Museum, Shanghai Museum…可知共有9个主要博物馆将会展出宝物，故答案为Nine museums。

38．句意：谁会在节目中介绍每一个宝物？根据In the show, national treasure keepers will introduce each treasure and tell us the stories with the treasures and their historical mystery(奥秘). 可知国宝守护人会介绍宝藏并讲述其中的历史，故答案应为The national treasure keepers.

39．Do your teachers allow you to feed animal in class? 40．这所学校想要告诉孩子们关心环境的重要性。

41．Although/Though the lesson are a little difficult, students are very interested in them. 42．他们习惯于用垃圾来种植植物。

43．我认为这些课程对学生们的生活产生了重大影响。 【分析】

这篇文章主要讲了Barnard School这所“绿色”学校通过特有的课程来告诉孩子们环境保护的重要性。

39．根据汉语提示可知句中考查固定短语allow sb. to do sth“允许某人做某事”和含有实义动词的一般疑问句。分析语境可知本句应使用一般现在时态，allow为实义动词，teachers 为复数主语，故句中用使用助动词Do来帮助实义动词完成疑问句，故答案应为Do your teachers allow you to feed animal in class?

40．句中涉及如下短语want to do“想要做某事”；the importance of…“...的重要性”；care about“关心、在意”，故答案应为：这所学校想要告诉孩子们关心环境的重要性。41．分析题干可判断本题考查Although或Though引导的让步状语从句，句中包含固定短语a little “稍微、有点”和be interested in“对…感兴趣，”故答案为Although/Though the lesson are a little difficult, students are very interested in them.

42．题干中get used to doing为固定短语“习惯于做某事”，故答案应为：他们习惯于用垃圾来种植植物。

43．题干中包含固定短语make a big difference to…“对…产生重大影响”，故答案应为：我认为这些课程对学生们的生活产生了重大影响。

44．What were you doing when the storm came?

45．What happened to yo u? / What’s the matter/trouble with you? 等。

46．Do you want to stay at home and rest? 47．Can you help me with my English? 48．Thank you. 【分析】

本文是David和朋友之间的对话，对话中David描述了当暴风雨来临时在做的事情、体育课受伤的、在英语方面寻求朋友的帮助。

44．根据下文答语I was seeing the doctor in the hospital when it came. 可知上文询问的是“当暴风雨来临时你正在做什么”故答案为What were you doing when the storm came?

45．根据下文答语I hurt my back in PE class.可知上文询问的是“你怎么了、你发生了什么”，故答案可以为：What happened to you? 或What’s the matter/trouble with you? 等等。

46．根据本句句尾的问号可知本句为问句，后文You are right, I really want to stay at home and rest, but I think the schoolwork is very important. 答语可知答案应为：Do you want to stay at home and rest?

47．根据后文Yes, sure. I will try my best to help you improve your English.可知此处询问的是可否在英语方面得到帮助，故答案为Can you help me with my English?

48．根据下文No problem. 可知本句应表达感谢之情，故答案应为Thank you.

49．Dear parents,

I’m really unhappy these days, because I don't think we get along well with each other.

On the one hand, you are always working so that we can’t have eno ugh time to communicate with each other. I’m in Grade 8 now, and I feel much more nervous than before because of the pressure from life and school.

On the other hand, you think I should always do best in every subject. But I always feel tired because I have too many after-school classes. Therefore, I have no free time to do the things I like. And I have lost interest in my study.

So I suggest that you should pay much more attention to my feelings instead of working all day long. In addition, would you please cut out some of my after-school activities? I want to have a communication with you to deal with these problems.

Yours, Li Hua 【详解】

这是一篇话题书信作文。要求以书信的方式给父母写一封信，谈谈目前你所遇到的问题及感受。写作要点包括：1.父母工作忙，无暇照顾你；2.父母过多关注你的学习成绩，给你报了很多补课班，导致没有许多自由时间；3.给父母提出三条建议，来改善你们之间的关系。首先，在写作之前要认真阅读给出的要点提示；其次，注意文章文体、人称和时态，根据题干

要求可知本文应使用一般现在时态，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，写作时要运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性；再次，必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。这篇作文层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。用了大量短语或连词，如get along well with,；On the one hand, On the other hand；communicate with；because of；do best

in；pay attention to；In addition；deal with等，为文章增色不少。