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2015雅思小作文地图

【篇一:雅思小作文地图题范文】

现在停车场改成了一个剧院。

the car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.

城镇a的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。

the number of homes in town a is likely to double

(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is

expected to )

又可为:

it is likely that the number of homes in town a will double.

(it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected

that?..)

细节变化

地图每个细节变化都要提到,不要忽视一个细节

语态

雅思小作文地图题写作用被动语态,因为叙述的是一个事实,被动语态表达的更加的清晰,准确。

如: 2000年在城镇a 新建了一个医院:a new hospital was established in town

a in 2000.

2014年开始,流程图与地图题的频率已经于其他图表题的频率不相上下,甚至有超过他们的趋势,2014年截止9月20日地图题已经考了4次,流程图也是4次。你还在备考时忽略这两种图吗?

地图题句式总结:

1. a lies/is situated in/is located in/on/to the east of b.

a 位于b的东面

2.a covers an area of about?.square meters/ hectares.

a的面积大概有。。。平方米/公顷

a covers a small area in 1980.

在1980年 a的面积很小。

3.a, which used to be located in?., is replaced by?.

原本位于。。。的a由。。。取代

4. next to/ adjacent to b, a remains unchanged throughout the period.

毗邻b的a在这期间没变。

5. it is clear/apparent/evident that the sharpest difference lies in?

很明显,最大的不同在于。。。

6. the map describes how a village/dock called ? expanded/developed from ? to?

地图描述了一个叫。。。的小镇/码头 由。。。扩大到。。。

7. a disappeared/vanished in 1990, when?.

1990年a消失了,在那时。。。

第一段改写题目。

第二段总体概述。

第三段没有变化的部分。

第四段发生变化的部分。

地图题就是这么简单!你学会了吗?

the map describes how a village named strokeford developed from 1930 to 2010. it is clear that the sharpest difference is that large stretches of farmland in 1930 were replaced by houses in 2010. it is also evident that the gardens in 1930 disappeared and a retirement home was erected in that place.

river stoke which lies to the east of the village and the bridge, which is located to the north of the village, remained the same throughout the four score years. a road which cuts through the village and which is connected to the bridge is another facility which remained largely unchanged.

two shops, one big and another small, situated along the road vanished and instead some new homes were built along a newly-built side road. the primary school expanded, with two large houses lying by its side. the retirement home in 2010 was on the original site of the gardens.

地图描述了一个叫strokeford的村庄从1930年到2010年的发展。

地图很清晰的显示了最大的变化是1930年的大片农田变成了2010年的住宅。同样明显变化是1930年的花园在2010年变成了疗养院。

位于村庄东面的stoke河和位于村庄北面的大桥在80年间都没有变化。贯穿小镇的公路,与桥相连,是另一个仍然没有变化的设施。

之前在路边的一大一小两个商店消失了,取代它们的是一些新的住宅,沿着新建小路建成。小学面积扩大了,边上建起了两间大教室。2010年公园原址建起了一个养老院。

writing task 1

you should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

the diagram below shows the development of the village of kelsby between 1780 and 2000.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

write at least 150 words.

首先注意两个点:

1. 时态:本文的时间是明确的,是三个过去的时间,因此全文应当使用一般过去时。有些地图会有将来的规划,那么则应使用相应的一般将来时。

2. 顺序:该图属于动态的地图题,这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道题中,也就是按照图的顺序依次来写,不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题(即不涉及时间变化的题型),则按照空间顺序来写。

下面跟着上海环球雅思的老师一起来分析文章的写作。

第一段:引言段。

引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram,可以替换成three maps/ illustrations.原文中的shows,可以改为illustrate/ demonstrate/ indicate等词。宾语development,可以替换成changes,也可以改为宾语从句how the village of kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊,可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

【例文】the three maps illustrate how the village of kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.

第二段:介绍1780年的情况。

1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据,因此只需要用存在句即可表达,不涉及任何变化的单词。但是,考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达,从而导致句式单一。表示存在的句型除了therebe之外,还有非常简单的have句型,还有lie/ be located/ be situated 这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型,比如“桌子上面有一本书”,可以翻译为on the desk is a book.

除此之外,要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素:住宅区homes,树林woods

,农

场farms,还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序(比如顺时针、逆时针,

从左到右)都是可以的,但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因,因此建议先写。

还有就是土地单位的表达,land是不可数名词,因此不能说aland,只能说a piece of

land。为了表达更加精确,可以用a plot of land(一小块),a stretch of(一长片),a large expanse of (一大片)。

另外还有注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有:in the east/ west/ south/ north of ? ; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ?; 如果是在角落,可以用in the southwestern corner of ? ; 在河流的上/下游:at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸:alongside the riverbank, 在河流的南端:at the southern end of the river.

【例文】in 1780, kelsby had only 100 homes. there was a large expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the centre. in the west was a river flowing from north to south.

60年的变化。

这一年的变化并没有时间先后,因此还是按照空间顺序来进行。图上多了一个元素,即道路和桥梁的修建。需要特别注意的是,因为考虑到和上文的呼应,这两个元素一定要放在后面讲,而家庭数量的增加和农场、树林面积的减少应当先讲。这个原则我们简称叫“先拆后建”原则、

第二点是时间的表达问题。上文中刚刚出现过in 1780,这里还是用in 1860的话,句式上就会出现重复。因此可以按照动态图里面学过的表达方法,把年份用作主语,用saw/ witnessed这两个词把数据引出来。

第三点是“建”这个词的英文表达。常见的词有build, construct(一般建筑物),

erect(高大的建筑物),establish/ set up(无建筑的物体或抽象的机构),pave(道路的修建)。另外,如果涉及到拆除,则需要记住demolish, pull down, knock down 这些单词。需要重点指出的是,这些表示“建”和“拆”的词都应当使用被动语态,这一点和普通流程图是一致的。

【例文】the year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes, but the size of farmland and woods was halved. in the same year, a bridge was constructed over the river and a road was paved linking the river to the residences.

第四段:介绍2000年的变化。

首先还是时间的表达,这里可以再换一种结构,比如140 years later/ after 140 years。首先还是“先拆后建”,先说树林农场彻底消失,然后在交代新的元素:学校和操场。要记住的是,道路是不需要交代方位的,只需要把起点和终点表达出来即可,用link a to b或者connect a with b这类词组连接。因此,道路的描写应放到学校、操场的后面。

【例文】140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and woods completely disappeared. in their places, several school

buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential areas in the north via a newly-build road. some shops opened up along the river bank and a large stretch of wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.

the maps below show the civic square of the town of smallville in 1980 and

now.

图例虽然纷繁复杂,但是究其本质,第一张图永远在描述所谓的“方位”,也就是,我们需要在这张图中描述清楚图中的东西南北,各自坐落了什么事物。其余的图,永远在描述所谓的“变化”,相当于在第一张图的草稿基础上,描述第二张图发生的“加变化”和“减变化”,“恒定变化“以及“转化变化”。

搞定了这两组词汇的说法,地图题就再也不是让考生们闻风丧胆的题目了。

第一组:方位词

在这个方面,需要注意的是,我们需要准备好两者之间的所有可能的位置关系,除了最基本的a在b的东西南北方以外,还需要掌握一些特定的限定表达,比如a在b的角落等等。基础表达:

a在b的东西南北方(内部/接壤/不接触):a is in /on / to the

east/west/south/north of b.

高阶表达:

a在b的东西南北方(内部):a is in the eastern/southern/western/northern partof b.

a在b的东西南北角落:a is at/in the eastern/southern/western/northerncorner of b.

a坐落于距离b??远处:a is(数字)kilometers / miles to the east / west / south /north of b.

a和b很近:a is near /next to /close to b.

a在b的对面:a is opposite / on the opposite side of b

第二组:变化词

其实,地图题目当中蕴涵的变化,从本质来说,无非是三种,一种为所谓的“加变化”也就是在原本基础上出现了新增的部分,另一种为“减变化”,也就是原本的内容出现了缩减。所谓“恒定表达”,即前后没有发生变化。还有一种涉及到了两种内容之间的转化,被称之为“转化表达”。

加变化:

a尺寸上变大了?:the size of a has been enlarged by?

a被建造在b:a is constructed / established in b.

a被增建在b:a is added to b.

减变化:

【篇二:雅思地图小作文 范文】

the original arealine was built across this new site from west to east and there the chorleywood station, located in the central part of the village. the old from the new area.

【篇三:雅思小作文详解6:地图题】

【9分作文盛宴】考官华丽雅思小作文详解6:地图题

simon是英国曼彻斯特的前雅思考官,由于创办雅思考试学习网站而在全世界的考生中越来越有名气。其网站上提供大量关于复习雅思的技巧以及性的建议,甚至还有不少simon本人亲笔写的满分作文。这些满分作文由于出自英国考官之手,非常地道,言简意赅,和中国考生惯用的千篇一律的模板作文相比,着实让人眼前一亮。点课台的phoebe老师深感有义务要让孩子们接触到真正可以提分的好作文,所以以后会频繁地帮大家整理并总结这些满分作文的精华,相信大家都可以扔掉模板,写出高分作文!

今天要分析的题目是地图——maps。

有的学生说,地图题型相对不常见,所以备考可以忽略。针对这种想法,simon是这样说

的:while it’s true that graphs and

charts are the most common types of question, i think it would be very unwise

not to prepare for diagrams and maps too. what happens if you get one of these

questions in your test and you haven’t prepared for it?

虽然不常见,但是如果平时不做任何准备,万一考到后果不堪设想。其实地图题并没有大家想象地那么难,只要花时间仔细研究一下simon的范文,大家都能写出一篇好作文。

请看今天的题目,就是下面这个地图:

写作文之前,要先plan your structure,simon建议地图题依然沿用4段式:

1. introduction: what does the chart show?

2. overview / summary: what are the most noticeable features?

3. specific details: try to write 2 paragraphs.

接下来说地图题最难的地方——如何准确读出图中所给信息,我们就先来分析一下,从这个地图上我们可写的信息有哪些,首先地图上为数不多的单词或数字不可遗漏,上方那句是说这张图展现了一个叫做chorleywood的村庄在1868年到1994年之间的发展情况。然后很清楚地能看出,在四个不同的时期,它的交通设施有明显的改善。居民都住在各种路的旁边。

这些只是大概的overview,足够写出前两段了,那还有哪些具体的细节,能够写进第三、四段中呢?大家自己再仔细看地图,从中找中可写的details。

接下来贴出完整满分范文,大家读的时候看一下simon按照什么order、挑出哪些细节来描述的:

the map shows the growth of a village called chorleywood between 1868 and

1994.

it is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure was

improved. four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the motorway.

from 1868 to 1883, chorleywood covered a small area next to one of the main

roads. chorleywood park and golf course is now located next to this original village area. the village grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and

1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built crossing this area from west to east.

chorleywood station is in this part of the village.

the expansion of chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside the

railway line until 1970. at that time, a motorway was built to the east of the

village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the village took place

around motorway intersections with the railway and one of the main roads.

最后是词汇总结:

growth:simon在对题目进行复述的时候用growth替换了development,这个用法大家要记住。

infrastructure:极其高频,常出现于写作和阅读,“设施”

populated:大家平时很少用形容词的形式,其英文释意为“furnished with inhabitants,即”有人居住的“

original:最初的,原始的

intersections with:和...相交,交叉路口,听力地图题中也很常见

今天先到这儿,希望simon的建议对大家有所帮助,以后不再怕遇见地图题,下期见!

需要更多写作技巧的点击这里!

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