2016年高考英语写作高分技巧
书面表达常见的一般表达和高级表达的句子对照表，供参考。
(1) 他昨天没来开会，因为他病了。
He didn’t come to the meeting yesterday because he was ill．（一般）
His illness accounted for (解释原因）his absence from the meeting yesterday．(高级)
(2) 当他还是个孩子的时候，他想学习一切。
When he was a child，he wanted to learn everything． （一般）
When he was a child，he had a strong appetite（欲望）for knowledge．(高级)
(3) 如果你考虑我的申请，我会感谢你的。
I’ll thank you if you think about my application． （一般）
I’ll appreciate it if you can take my application into consideration．(高级)
(4) 许多人担心空气污染问题。
Many people are worried about the problem of air pollution．（一般）
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The problem of air pollution has caused wide public concern．(高级)
(5) 我们都认为空气污染是一个非常严重的问题。
We all think that air pollution is a very serious problem． （一般）
There is no denying that air pollution is an extremely serious problem．(高级)
( 6) 许多专家指出体育锻炼对人的健康有好处。
Many experts point out that physical exercise is good for people's health． （一般）
Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness．(高级)
(7) 我们将尽最大的努力发展我们之间的传统友谊。
We’ll try our best to develop the traditional friendship
between us． （一般）
We’ll spare no efforts to promote the traditional friendship
between us． （高级）
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(8) 近年来，越来越多的人买了汽车。
More and more people have bought cars in recent years． （一般）
The numbers of people，who have access to their own cars，have risen sharply in recent years．(高级)
(9) 我认为国外旅游者的数量应该受到。
I think that the number of foreign tourists should be limited． （一般）
I'm firmly convinced that the number of foreign tourists should be limited． （高级）
(10) 我们学校的学生人数已经变小了。
The number of students in our school has become smaller． （一般）
The number of students in our school has been in decline．(高级)
(11)高级词汇替换
1. occur 替换 think of
Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house.（一般）→An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
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It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house.
2. devote替换spend
He spends all his spare time in reading. （一般） →
He devotes all his spare time to reading. 3. suppose 替换should
He is supposed to ( should一般) have driven more slowly.
4. appreciate 替换thank
Thank you very much for you help. （一般）→
We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.
5. due to替换because of
He arrived late due to ( because of一般) the storm.
6. round the corner 替换 coming soon
The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming一般). Do you have any plans?
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7. in the course of替换during
In the course of (During一般) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.
8. the majority of替换most
如何写出英语作文得分的“亮点” 以下几种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点” 。
1. 改变句子的开头方式,不是一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状 语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词作状语等。
试比较:
(原文) My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day.
(修正) The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.
(原文) The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
(修正) Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.
2. 在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短 语、倒装句、省略句等。
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例如: (1)强调句
(原文) The dog has saved my little sister bravely.
(修正) It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely.
(2)主从复合句
(原文) We had to stand there to catch the offender.
(修正) What we had to do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender.
(3)分词短语、由 with 或 without 引导的短语
(原文) The driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the road.
(修正) The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road.
(4)倒装句
(原文) I went to bed at 11:30.
(修正) Not until 11:30 did I go to bed.
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(5)省略句
(原文) While you are crossing the street, you should be careful.
(修正) While crossing the street, you should be careful.
3. 通过分句和合句, 增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
例如:
(原文) He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
(修正) He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
(原文) We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.
(修正) After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.
4. 注意连接词与句子的运用。
5. 使用过渡词语。 写好了每个句子, 并不一定就是一篇好文章,因为作为一篇文章,还必须行文连贯。这就要求我们在组成篇章时,要用好过渡性词语,过渡性词语就像润滑剂一样, 起着润滑的作用。
常用的过渡词语主要有:
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并列递进: and, also, as well as, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, etc.
转折: but, yet, however, although, nevertheless, in spite of, after all, etc. 因果: because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc.
对比: or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc.
总结: in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, etc.
高中英语写作的亮点句型，背诵并且学着模仿吧
1. 肯定不如双否好
Qingdao attracts many visitors every year.
Qingdao never fails to attract a lot of visitors every year. （更高级）
I want to thank you for your hospitality.
I can’t thank you enough for your hospitality.
再怎样感谢你的殷勤好客也不过分（更高级）
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2. 陈述不如倒装妙
阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法：倒装，强调，从句，分词或主格，虚拟语气。倒装最为简单易行。
So glad am I to receive your letter. 我如此开心收到你的信。
Not only can cycling help build up our body, but it is also very environmentally friendly.
骑自行车不光强身健体，也环保
Never will you achieve success if you don’t make efforts,
如果你不努力，你永远都不会取得成功。
By no means should we allow physical punishment. 我们绝对不允许体罚。
Important as grades are in judging a student, ………..
尽管成绩在评判学生方面重要，……..
3. 主动不如被动巧
More attention should be paid to developing students’ all-around ability.
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更多的关注应放在发展学生的全面能力上。
Now that we are faced with so many problems, measures should be taken to improve the situation. 既然我们面临着一些问题，就应采取措施改善局面。
Although study is important for a student, their health should not be ignored.
尽管学习对学生很重要，他们的健康不应受到忽视。
4. 分词结构不能少。 很多状语从句都可以变成分词或主格，如：
① 面临着这么多问题，我们要采取措施改善局面。
Now that we are faced with so many problems, we should take measures to improve the situation.
Faced with so many problems, we should take measures to improve the situation.
②走在大街上，我们会发现越来越多的小汽车。
When we walk on the street, we can find more and more cars.
Walking on the street, we can find more and more cars.
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③情况若是如此，你应该向她道歉。
If this is the case, you should apologize to her.
This being the case, you should apologize to her.
5.从句虚拟加强调
What matters is the effort you have made.
主语从句：重要的是你付出的努力。
Attending English Corner can help us make more friends, which may also improve our English.
定语从句：参加英语角能让我们交到更多朋友，它也能改善我们的英语。
It is what you do instead of what you say that counts/matters.
强调句型：是你做了什么而不是说了什么重要。
Without your help I wouldn’t have made so much progress.
虚拟：要不是你的帮助，我就不会取得这么大进步。
How I wish I had worked hard during the past 2 years!
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虚拟：我多么希望在过去两年里我努力了。
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