英语书面表达写作策略 讲义 2023届高考英语专题复习

英语书面表达写作策略

策略（一） “包装”让词汇高端起来 1.用词无重复原则——求雅变异

写作时，应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语。恰当地使用同义词（组）不仅可以体现雅致的文彩，还有利于增强段落的统一性和连贯性。例如： （1）old people→the elderly/senior citizens 老人

（2）a way to do sth.→an approach to doing sth.做某事的方法 （3）all kinds of→a variety of/various/a wide range of各种各样的 （4）finish→accomplish完成

（5）hard/difficult→tough/challenging困难的 （6）different→various 不同的 （7）free→available有空的 （8）sorry→upset 难过的

（9）glad→pleased/delighted/cheerful/joyful 高兴的

（10）inspire→spark 激发，鼓舞

（11）be busy with→be absorbed in/be occupied with/be engaged in忙于 [针对训练1] 同义词替换。

1.In order to enrich students' after-school life，an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school，which inspires a growing love for traditional art.

→In order to enrich students' after-school life，an exhibition of students' traditional Chinese paintings is being held by our school，which a growing love for traditional art. （2021·浙江卷满分作文）

2.Due to COVID-19， it is difficult for farmers to sell their produce，making them very hopeless. →Due to COVID-19，it is for farmers to sell their produce， making them very hopeless.

答案：1.sparks 2.tough/challenging 2.词义具体化原则——生动贴切

写作中尽量避免使用意义广泛、模棱两可的词，而要根据语境使用具体生动的词。 [针对训练2] 补全句子。

1.Listening to songs and watching movies are good for improving their spoken English.

→Listening to songs and watching movies improving their spoken English.（2022·全国乙卷作文）

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2.The whole course was extremely difficult. →The

whole

course

was

extremely

difficult

，

（尤其是靠近山的地方，狭窄而不平）.（2020·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文） 答案：1.are beneficial to

2.especially the part near the mountain，narrow and rough 3.高年级词汇优先原则——新颖高级

为了表现自己的语言功底，吸引阅卷老师的眼球，应尽量使用高年级阶段学到的词汇，而不用低年级阶段学到的词汇。 [针对训练3] 同义词替换。

1.We are supposed to adopt a proper way to protect us from the terrible virus. →We

are

supposed

to

adopt________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________us from the terrible virus.

2.There is all kinds of local operas around China，such as Beijing Opera and Kun Opera. →There is local operas around China，such as Beijing Opera and Kun Opera.

答案：1.an appropriate approach to protecting 2.a wide range of 4.短语优先原则——凑词增色

用短语代替单词不仅会给文章增加亮点，而且用短语凑词数也是一个很好的选择。 （1）形容词变短语的方法（of＋同根名词）。 very

important/useful/valuable/beneficial/helpful→of

vital/great

importance/use/value/benefit/help （2）动词变短语的方法——替换升级。

动词 know/realize understand should use consider be coming master thank represent 对应短语 be aware of/be familiar with figure out/make sense of be supposed to make use of/take advantage of take ...into account/consideration be approaching/be around the corner have a good command of express one's sincere gratitude to on behalf of

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succeed help value visit like make it/achieve one's goals do sb.a favour attach importance to pay a visit to be fond of/be interested in/be crazy about/be addicted to （3）副词变短语的方法——同义短语替换。

副词 very properly quickly actually possibly [针对训练4] 词汇升级。

1.I master English，which enables me to communicate with foreign friends well.

→I________________________________________________________________________English，which

enables me to communicate with foreign friends well.

2.So，it is high time that we did all we can to affect the sustainable development of oceans greatly. →So，it is high time that we did all we can to the sustainable development of oceans.（2022·全国甲卷作文）

3.I'm very delighted to learn that you take great interest in the Spring Festival. →I'm delighted to learn that you take great interest in the Spring Festival.（2021·北京高考满分作文）

答案：1.have a good command of 2.make a huge difference to 3.more than 策略（二） “换装”让句子新颖起来

换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。 1.特殊句式，风景独好

（1）运用强调句：强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成为：

①强调句型基本结构为“It＋is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋句子其他部分”。 ②借助于助动词do/does/did对谓语动词进行强调。 [针对训练5] 对加黑部分进行强调。

1.In my memory，Youth accompanies me through my whole high school.

→________________________________________________________________________

对应短语 more than in place without delay as a matter of fact whenever possible

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________________________________________________________________________（2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文）

2.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. →________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 3.I expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.

→________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________（2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文）

答案：1.In my memory，it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school. 2.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. 3.I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future. （2）运用倒装句，以示强调。

在写作中，倒装句应用比较广泛，涉及的句型也比较多，包括部分倒装和全部倒装。常见的有：

①“only＋状语”置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。

②none、neither、nor、not、never、hardly、little、seldom等否定词以及at no time、by no means等短语置于句首时，句子用部分倒装。

③在so/such...that...结构中，当so/such...位于句首时，其后的句子用部分倒装。 ④as、though引起的倒装句。

⑤表方位的副词或者表地点的介词短语置于句首且句子的主语是名词时，句子用全部倒装。 [针对训练6] 句型转换。

1.Ocean pollution can be dramatically highlighted with everyone's involvement.（用only＋介词短语引起倒装）. →Only

with

everyone's

involvement________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________. （2022·全国甲卷作文）

2.We had hardly arrived at the farm when we saw many oranges hanging from the branches. →Hardly at the farm when we saw many oranges hanging from the branches.（2020·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文）

3.She is so patient with each student that we all like her.

→So patient with each student we all like her.（2020·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文）

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4.An old temple which dates back to Ming Dynasty stands at the foot of the mountain. →At

the

foot

of

the

mountain________________________________________________________________________，

which dates back to Ming Dynasty.

5.Through the exhibition，you can not only admire wonderful pictures，but also understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better.

→Through the exhibition，not only ，but also understand the art of traditional Chinese painting better.（2021·浙江高考满分作文）

答案：1.can ocean pollution be dramatically highlighted 2.had we arrived 3.is she that 4.stands an old temple

5.can you admire wonderful pictures （3）运用省略句，避免不必要的重复。 [针对训练7] 句型转换。

1.When I feel depressed，I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories.

→________________________________________________________________________，I often

choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories.（2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文）

2.If it is possible，avoid going to crowded public places such as cinemas，shopping malls，Internet bars and so on.

→ ，avoid going to crowded public places such as cinemas，shopping malls，Internet bars and so on.

答案：1.When feeling depressed 2.If possible 2.三大句式，编排巧妙 （1）运用定语从句。 [针对训练8] 句型转换。

1.We all know that Chinese food has become increasingly popular around the world.（用as进行转换）

→________________________________________________________________________Chinese food has

become increasingly popular around the world.

2.Ninety students from twenty classes participated in the race and among them thirty were girls. →Ninety students from twenty classes participated in the race， thirty

，

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were girls.（2020·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文） 答案：1.As is known to us all 2.among whom （2）运用名词性从句。 [针对训练9] 补全句子。

1.________________________________________________________________________（令他吃惊的）is that the

little girl knows so many things. 2.I

（我那天下午得参加一个重要会议）. 3.Word

came________________________________________________________________________ （我们学校打算举行一次班会）whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs.（2021·全国甲卷满分作文）

答案：1.What surprises him 2.that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon 3.that our school is going to hold a class meeting （3）运用状语从句。 [针对训练10] 补全句子。

1.________________________________________________________________________ （随着世界变成一个地球村），English is getting more and more important.

2.________________________________________________________________________（尽管我被拒

绝了），I still received some great encouragement，which gives me confidence to be a writer.（2021·新高考卷Ⅰ满分作文）

答案：1.As the world is becoming a global village 2.Refused as/though I was/Although/Though/While I was refused

3.活用非谓语，让表达言简意赅

用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句，提升表达档次，使句子凝练高端。 [针对训练11] 句型转换。

1.As the ocean pollution is becoming more and more serious，June 8th is officially named by the United Nations as the World Oceans Day，which is aimed at raising people's awareness of ocean conservation.

→________________________________________________________________________ ，June 8th is officially named by the United Nations as the World Oceans Day，

have

just

found________________________________________________________________________

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which is aimed at raising people's awareness of ocean conservation.（2022·全国甲卷作文） 2.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.（用非谓语动词短语转换） →She

walked

out

of

the

lab

，

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________. 3.When we are faced with all kinds of information on the Internet，we can't tell the difference between the true and the false，which may be harmful to our study and life.（用非谓语动词短语转换）

→________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________，we can't tell

the difference between the true and the false，which may be harmful to our study and life.（2021·全国乙卷满分作文）

4.On the other hand，online learning itself has some imperfections，which makes it difficult for us not to be affected. →On

the

other

hand，online

learning

itself

has

some

imperfections，

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________. （2021 · 全国乙卷满分作文）

答案：1.With the ocean pollution becoming more and more serious 2.followed by many students

3.Faced with all kinds of information on the Internet 4.making it difficult for us not to be affected 4.适时感叹，必要强调 [针对训练12] 补全句子。

________________________________________________________________________（我们玩得多么开心啊）！

Not only did it give us relaxation，but also it got us closer to nature.（2020·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文） 答案：What a wonderful time we had 5.it句式表达技高一筹

（1）It is/was＋形容词/名词＋that...

It's necessary/important/natural that sb.（should）do.... 某人做……是必要的/重要的/自然的 It is likely that...有可能……

It is（high/about）time that＋主语＋did/should do...

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该是……的时候了

It is/was no surprise/wonder that... ……不足为奇

It is a pity that...遗憾的是…… （2）It is/was＋过去分词＋that... It is widely believed/acknowledged that ... 人们普遍相信/认为……

It is known that...（＝What is known is that.../As we all know，...）众所周知…… It is strongly recommended that... 强烈建议……

It is reported/said/hoped that... 据报道/据说/人们希望…… It is thought/considered that... ……被认为……，大家认为……

（3）It＋be＋名词＋（of/for sb）to do sth. It's a great honour for sb to do sth.

对某人来说做某事是一件非常荣幸的事情 It's my great privilege to do sth. 做某事是我的莫大荣幸 （4）动词＋it＋其他。

I'd appreciate it if...如果……我将感激不尽

sb.hate（s）/dislike（s）/love（s）/like（s）it when... 某人讨厌/喜欢…… （5）it的其他相关句型： It goes without saying that... 毫无疑问/不言而喻……

It takes（sb.）some time/energy to do sth. 做某事花费了（某人）一些时间/精力 It is no use/good doing sth. 做某事没有用处/好处 When it comes to...当谈到……

As sb.put（s） it ...正如某人所说的那样…… It has been＋时间段＋since... 自从……有多长时间了

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It happens/happened that ...

偶然……；

sb.happen （s）/happened to do ...某人碰巧……

It occurs to/hits/strikes sb.that... 某人突然想到……

It seems/appears that...看起来似乎……

（6）主语＋think/believe/feel/make/find＋it＋形容词/名词＋（of/for sb.＋）to do sth. [针对训练13] 补全句子/句型转换。

1.________________________________________________________________________ （众所周知），more than two-thirds of the Earth's surface is covered by water.（2022·全国甲卷作文）

2.I________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________traditional Chinese culture.

我认为这是进一步了解中国传统文化的一个很好的机会。 3.It _

in a new environment. 在新的环境中学会和他人相处对每个人都是重要的。

4.It is known that the Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World，which is located in North China.

→ the Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World，which is located in North China.（主语从句）

→ ，the Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World，which is located in North China.（非性定语从句）

答案：1.As we all know 2.consider it a wonderful opportunity to further understand 3.should learn to get along well with others 4.What is known is that As we all know 策略（三） “改装”让细节丰满起来

在英语写作中，适当增加细节内容，能使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。 1.增加同位语或定语从句 [针对训练14] 补全句子。 1.I'm

Li

Hua

，

is

important

that

everyone_______________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________ （一个参加交流项目的中国学生），and I'm studying in this school. 2.To

begin

with，the

theme

of

the

show

is

Environment

Protection，

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________________________________________________________________________ （这不仅有意义，而且有趣）.

答案：1.a Chinese student on an exchange programme 2.which will be not only meaningful but also interesting 2.列举具体的实例来补充说明 [针对训练15] 补全句子。 1.I'll

spend

some

time

staying

with

my

parents

，

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ （和他们聊天，做一些家务）.

2.In the past two weeks，we have had the cultural communication in many aspects，________________________________________________________________________ （例如生活、学习、体育、文学、艺术等）. 答案：1.chatting with them and doing some housework 2.such as life，study，sports，literature，arts and so on

3.添加与所给信息有关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容 [针对训练16] 补全句子。

1.I am more than delighted to share some details with you.

→________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ （知道您对我们的“珍爱生命”活动感兴趣），I am more than delighted to share some details with you.

2.I'm planning to take a part time job in a foreign company.

→________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________（为了获得一些实践经验），

I'm planning to take a part-time job in a foreign company.

答案：1.Knowing that you are interested in our Cherish Life activity 2.In order to get some practical experience 4.内容适当具体化

[针对训练17] 补全句子。

1.I'm going to do some shopping in the supermarket. →I'm

going

to

do

some

shopping________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

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（在超市里，直到下午5点才能回来）. 2.The activity will be held in Classroom 501. →The

activity

will

be

held________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________（4月11日的上午9时至10时） in Classroom 501.

答案：1.in the supermarket and won't be back until 5 o'clock in the afternoon 2.from 9 a.m.to 10 a.m.on 11 April 5.表达感受、评价、愿望、倡议等 [针对训练18] 补全句子。 1.I

think

it

is

a

good

chance

to

appreciate

local

operas

，

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ （这肯定能帮助你了解更多的中国文化）. 2.We

can

set

out

early________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ （这样我们就可以有更多的时间来阅读和选择书了）.

答案：1.which will surely help you learn more about Chinese culture 2.so that we can have more time to read and select books 策略（四） “化装”让语篇靓丽起来

根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，使文章浑然一体。 1.表示“首先”的词语

如first/firstly，first of all，to begin/start with等。

①First of all，we must make full use of every 45-minute lesson. ②To begin with，smoking should be banned in public areas. 2.表示“其次”的词语

如second/secondly，besides，in addition，what's more，furthermore，moreover等。 ①Secondly，we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions. ②What's more，good books can help us to develop good characters.

③In addition，doctors are highly respected in China and in great demand，especially highly qualified professionals. 3.表示“最后”的词语

如last/lastly，last but not least，most importantly等。

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①Last but not least，health is also very significant for us students.

②Most importantly，reading those books opened a window for me to another world and gave me a new point of view. 4.表示“总之”的词语

如in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one word，to sum up，all in all，on the whole，in general等。

In a word，success is important，and so is failure，because it's the mother of success. [针对训练19] 补全句子。

1. （首先），as smart online learners，we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon.

2. （而且），12% of the students choose to visit English-learning websites when enhancing English skill.（2022·全国乙卷作文） 答案：1.First of all 2.What's more

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