2015-6-6 Task 2 Anask 2 Analysis Some people pople prefer to provide help and support directly to loca local community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有⼈人喜欢直接帮助社区中需要帮助的⼈人。也有些⼈人喜欢把钱投给国内或国际慈善组织。讨论这两个观点并且表达你⾃自⼰己的想法。12345Topic 话题Question type 题型5W ANALYZE THE QUESTION审题（WHO+what+when+where+why+how）WHO: peopleWHAT: do charity CharityDiscussHow: direct support vs money donationWhere: local vs national & internationalidentify key words and their synonyms 关键词理解identify all the writing tasks确定全部写作任务support directly=direct involvementgive money to=donatecharitable organizations=charities1. some people prefer direct help2. others donate to non-profit organizations3. own opinionBrainstorming and organd organizing ideas 写作思路Direct supportDonation to non-profitNecessary: 必要性 有些问题单纯本地解决不了not easy to tackle at the local levelBenefits: 重要性 资本有效运作：Meet more basic needs with fewer dollars减税福利：tax benefits for helping globally6Necessary: 必要性 组织运作不当，造成损失: charity fraudsBenefits: 重要性 积极参与：direct involvement及时⾼高效: concretely helping⽴立竿⻅见影: make a significant difference!1
Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to the local community who need it. Others prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people are faced with the dilemma in philanthropy that where their contributions will have the most impact. While some people have a preference for direct support to those in need, others believe that donating to non-profit charitable groups would be better.
On the one hand, most people prefer direct involvement with services provided directly to people in need, especially in their own communities, because they can immediately make a significant difference in someone’s life such as food for the hungry, shelter for the homeless, and doctors for sick children. By contrast, giving to national or international non-profits or institutions might not help the people who need the aid most. The money might end up paying for the non-profit's organizational marketing or costs of operations. In the worst case, the donation might end up contributing to corruption or bribery in countries that lack stable governments and effective relief distribution programs.
On the other hand, it is also believed that donating money to charitable groups with national or international focus is also essential, especially for those in developing countries. Indeed, a dollar contributed to international causes reaches much further when spent in developing countries. In some countries, 100 dollars can send a child to school for a whole year. Furthermore, some problems that charities confront are not easy to tackle at the local level. For example, some of the air pollution experienced in one area may be partly generated in another area and carried by prevailing winds, and to deal with such problems requires a regional or national approach.
In conclusion, we are not arguing that one way of helping people is better than another. When it comes to giving, different preferences benefit certain groups of people, and donors should balance their contributions to support both local and international causes.(299 words, band 9)
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